2025小学英语写作语言简洁试卷及答案

2025 小学英语写作语言简洁试卷及答案 一、单项选择题 1. Which sentence is more concise? A. The girl who is pretty is singing. B. The pretty girl is singing. C. The girl, she is pretty, is singing. D. The girl is pretty and she is singing. 2. Choose the most concise option. A. In my opinion, I think we should go. B. I think we should go. C. It is my belief that we should go. D. From my perspective, I believe we should go. 3. Which sentence avoids unnecessary words? A. The book that was written by Tom is good. B. Tom's book is good. C. The book, which Tom wrote, is good. D. The book written by Tom is good. 4. Select the concise version. A. He returned back to home. B. He returned home. C. He went back to home. D. He came back to his home. 5. Which is the best concise sentence? A. The reason why is because it is late. B. It is late. C. The reason is that it is late. D. Because it is late. 6. Choose the most direct expression. A. She made a decision to leave. B. She decided to leave. C. She came to a decision to leave. D. She determined that she would leave. 7. Which sentence is 简洁? A. The boy, who is my friend, is coming. B. My friend boy is coming. C. The boy my friend is coming. D. My friend is coming. 8. Identify the concise option. A. At this point in time, we are ready. B. Now we are ready. C. Currently, we are ready. D. We are ready at this moment. 9. Which sentence uses fewer words? A. The car that is red is fast. B. The red car is fast. C. The car, red in color, is fast. D. The car is red and it is fast. 10. Select the most efficient sentence. A. I need to have a discussion with you. B. I need to discuss with you. C. I need to talk to you about something. D. I require a conversation with you. 二、多项选择题 1. Which of the following are ways to make writing concise? (Choose all that apply) A. Use active voice B. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily C. Include many adjectives D. Write long sentences 2. Select the techniques for concise writing. A. Remove filler words B. Use short sentences C. Add extra details D. Use passive voice 3. Which phrases are redundant and should be avoided? A. Free gift B. Important essentials C. Quick moment D. Brief summary 4. Identify the concise expressions. A. Due to the fact that B. Because C. In order to D. To 5. Which options demonstrate concise language? A. The meeting will start at 9 AM. B. The meeting will commence at 9 AM in the morning. C. The meeting begins at 9. D. The meeting is scheduled for 9 AM. 6. Choose the sentences that are not concise. A. She is a person who is kind. B. She is kind. C. The house that is big is expensive. D. The big house is expensive. 7. Which are examples of wordy phrases? A. At the present time B. Now C. For the purpose of D. For 8. Select the tips for 简洁写作. A. Use synonyms to vary language B. Eliminate unnecessary words C. Keep sentences short and clear D. Always use complex sentences 9. Which sentences could be made more concise? A. The student who is studying hard will succeed. B. The hard-studying student will succeed. C. The student studies hard and will succeed. D. The diligent student will succeed. 10. Identify the redundant pairs. A. Past history B. Future plans C. Sudden crisis D. Basic fundamentals 三、判断题 1. "In my opinion, I think" is a concise phrase. 2. Using active voice always makes writing more concise. 3. "The reason is because" is a concise expression. 4. Removing unnecessary words improves conciseness. 5. "She smiled happily" is concise because "happily" adds detail. 6. "Avoid using long sentences" is a tip for concise writing. 7. "The book that I read" can be shortened to "The book I read" for conciseness. 8. "Very unique" is a concise phrase. 9. Concise writing means using as few words as possible without losing meaning. 10. "He nodded his head" is redundant and not concise. 四、简答题 1. Rewrite the sentence to make it concise: "The boy who is tall is playing basketball." 2. Explain one way to make writing more concise. 3. How would you shorten "Due to the fact that it was raining, we stayed home."? 4. Provide an example of a redundant phrase and how to fix it. 答案： 一、1.B 2.B 3.B 4.B 5.B 6.B 7.D 8.B 9.B 10.B 二、1.AB 2.AB 3.ABC 4.BD 5.ACD 6.AC 7.AC 8.BC 9.AC 10.ACD 三、1.False 2.True 3.False 4.True 5.False 6.True 7.True 8.False 9.True 10.True 四、1.The tall boy is playing basketball. 2.Remove unnecessary words or use active voice. 3.Because it was raining, we stayed home. 4."Free gift" can be fixed to "gift" since all gifts are free.